Getting you out of my mind appears a task I’m incapable of.
“I want to fuck you” sounds so crude to my ears. Inelegant. Inadequate. And yet that brief clip of dialogue retains an inescapable appeal. Succinct. Unequivocal. Brilliantly evocative.
But the word ‘want’ fails to capture the essence of what I’m trying to say. ‘Ache’. ‘Desire’. ‘Yearn’. Any one of those words would be far closer to reality. Images of you fill my mind’s eye in moments of calm and quiet. I envision your nakedness entwined with my own, our bodies locked in every conceivable form of sexual congress, our skin salty and slick with the perspiration of lust, breathing ragged, pulses racing as we seek delicious completion.
Each time I hear the sultry tones of your voice, the way your sensuality infuses every syllable that you utter, my hunger for your flesh grows. My cock aches perpetually, caught in a nether region of frustration, restless, frantic for the touch of your hand, your mouth, for the bewitching embrace of your velvety cunt.
Not being able to quench myself within you might be the closest I’ve ever come to experiencing withdrawal.
So tell me, please.
What do you want in return?
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It’s hard to navigate that line between desire and obsession…if I didn’t know any better, I’d say…well, never mind what I’d say. Maybe that’s better kept to myself, or at least expressed a little more discreetly than simply stated on a blog, where they might be taken the wrong way.
Just want to say you’re making me relive certain experiences in my life, with some incredibly evocative words.
Aurumgirl,
I’m glad you found the words suitably evocative. If you should ever desire a more discreet means of expression, there’s always email…
EA
mmm… just for you to keep on writing
this ties in nicely with ‘just a girl’s question on her blog.. though the line between want and need is still very blurred here…
Learn:
I’m not sure if I was looking in the right place when I Googled “just a girl” and “blog” - I didn’t notice any question, but that might be down to myopia.
It’s nice that you’d like me to keep on writing though…
EA
I am outing myself, EA. I have been a lurker in the past but there was something about this post. It captured the essence of what I have been feeling recently and have been unable to put into words.
I wish I was able to write so eruditely and concisely.
Kristen:
It’s good to have you come out from Lurk-Land. Thank you for the complement about the writing. I don’t think anyone’s ever associated me with the term ‘learned’ before; perhaps I ought to invite you to speak with my PR team…
EA
I am always happy to oblige, EA. Of course, since you will [hopefully] all have lovely accents, I will be there with bells on.
Yes, I’m afraid that both I and my PR team are all stuck with exceedingly English accents…
EA
oops sorry EA, I was under the impression that she was on your list for some reason.
anyways, you can find her on my list on my blog.
take care!
learn
Thanks, Learn. I was looking in the wrong place first time around. Evidently, there’s more than just the one ‘just a girl’ !
EA
Yes, I do enjoy your writing style greatly. I have to sit down late tonight and do a little writing, but my mindset’s been off for three or four days. Maybe your backlog might provide “inspiration.”
I’m sure a little investigating might suffice.
Thanks, Steff. Having just perused your “On Girl Love” post, you evidently dug out some inspiration from somewhere…
EA
Lovely writing as always EA - I like the simmering barely contained tension and yearning in this. Does the word “velvety” just drip with sex?
Cheers,
Ell
Thank you, Ell. And we’re certainly in agreement on the extreme sexual connotations of “velvety”…
EA
No, sadly, that was a moment from last week. I’ve yet to write something for CL for a few days. My “normal” blog is thriving, though. There’s that.
But I’ve a date tomorrow so maybe I’ll happen on a muse. Let’s hope.
The main thing is, the creative juices are still flowing, even if it’s towards your “normal” blog. And muses are always generous towards active minds…
EA
I’ve been lurking for awhile and I just want to say that your words “move” me. I know that’s a bit cliché, but nonetheless it’s true. Keep writing with such vivid elegance & you will have a fan forever.
I’m touched, Coco. Thank you. And I’ll do my best to hold your attention…
EA
Definitely very nice writing, I have to agree.
I enjoy your style, it’s subtle yet intense.
Thank you, KC. I’m glad you find the writing to your taste.
~EM
It is crude, but harks back to an earlier comment, sometimes we need to strip away the fluff and the padding, and get dirty, what better than to be somewhere, and your lover whispers that in your ear….
Indeed…
~EA